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[post]1).I'm interested in this sport, and I'm fairly flexible limbs, can improve my sensitivity. 改成I have fairly flexible lims. This exercise program can improve my sensitivity.
2).I had college students would have more time. 改成 I'm a college student who has more spare time.
3).I was a girl, learning Tae kwon do to protect themselves. 改成 I'm a girl, learning Tae Kwon Do could protect myself.
总体非常好！插图很有趣！
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发表于 2012-10-13 10:18:32
